Make love for the gods eh? Better than throwing a virgin in a volcano.
That curtain is so thin what is the point.
Lightsabers!
Soldier always with raping?!
Entering a new city in the rain is a trope.
Asteroids are always a good segue.
Now what is this military lunatic high on? Those are not cupping marks.
That is an extremely elaborate way to kill a helpless prisoner.
The richness of this setting deserves an award.
What’s the line… “The more star systems will slip through your fingers.”
Not a deep story, loose motivation if any for characters to join. Would be better, though much longer, if all had flashback history. Maybe in part 2.